PILOT PART 2 SECTION 1

WE RETURN TO WHERE WE LEFT OFF. OUR HEROES ARE IN A STORAGE ROOM. THE STORAGE ROOM HAS A LITTLE WINDOW ON ONE WALL AND A SINGLE DOOR WITH A CONTROL PANEL NEXT TO IT ON ANOTHER WALL, AND SHELVES ON THE OTHER TWO WALLS. JAX WAKES UP SLOWLY, DUE TO THE SUNLIGHT STREAMING IN THE ROOM FROM THE WINDOW, AND ACCIDENTLY SMACKS LORIAN IN THE RIBS. WHICH WAKES HIM UP INSTANTLY AND SAYS, “OW! DANG IT.” JAX LOOKS IN THE DIRECTION OF THE VOICE. HE CAN SEE A FIGURE, BUT CAN’T SEE WHO IT IS. HE THEN ROLLS INTO A DEFENSIVE POSITION, MAKING HIM HIT HIS HEAD ON ONE OF THE SHELVES. THIS MAKES HIM HAVE A BIGGER HEADACHE THAN HE ALREADY DID. THEN THEY ARGUE A LITTLE BIT, THAT IT WAS ON PURPOSE AND NOT ON ACCIDENT THAT JAX HIT LORIAN IN THE RIBS. THEN THEY REALIZE WHERE THEY WERE PUT BY CYRUS. THEN THEY TRY TO ESCAPE. FIRST THEY TRY THROUGH THE WINDOW, BUT IT WAS LOCKED. THEN JAX MAKES THE SUGGESTION TO GET COMFORTABLE. THEN HE STARTS TO MESS WITH HIS BOOT AND TOUCHES THE HEEL OF THE BOOT, WHICH MAKES A SECRET COMPARTMENT OPEN. IT REVEALS FIVE SMALL, ROUND BLUE BALLS AND FIVE SMALL, ROUND RED BALLS (WHICH ARE REVEALED TO BE GRENADES, RED, AND THE OTHERS, BLUE, TO BE SMOKE BOMBS.) JAX REMOVES A RED BALL AND SHOWS IN TO LORIAN. JAX THEN DECIDES TO USE IT AND THROWS IT TOWARDS THE DOOR. LORIAN TRIES TO STOP HIM, BUT REALISES THAT IT’S TOO LATE PUSHES JAX TO THE FAR CORNER AND DUCKS DOWN HIMSELF. THEN THE DOOR IS BLASTED INTO THE NEXT ROOM. THEN JAX THOUGHT IT WAS “COOL,” BUT LORIAN THOUGHT DIFFERENTLY. INFACT, HE WAS YELLING AT JAX THAT HE COULD HAVE KILLED THEM. THEN THEY ARGUE ABOUT IT FOR A FEW MINUTES.

PILOT PART 1 SECTION 3

Then they get their first assignment: patrol. But first they go to the huge hanger, where “x” gives jax and lorian a tour of the entire hanger, which is not that much, but any way. They see the big ship, which is for off planet assignments. They see a blue striped x-wing, which wade was fixing up for jax, which he gets later. They also see two speeders, one black and one white, with the letters ida on the sides. Then "x" gives jax and lorian their own utility belts. Jax’s belt is on his waist and lorian’s is across his chest on his left sholder (like Chewbacca’s except opposite.) jax drives the speeder out of the open hanger doors, which opens by retracting into the adjoining wall, and into the always busy city of coruscant. A few hours later jax and lorian starts to argue, it doesn’t go into a yelling match though. Then lorian gets thirsty and decides to go to a small club where they sit down and order drinks. Then they sit down. After a while they start to look around and start to notice that some of the patrons are the most wanted criminals in the galaxy. They start to whisper that to each other. The bartender hears them whispering and gets suspicious. He goes to the back room and gets the owner of the establishment (the guy that was at the other end of the com-link.) he tells that his name is cyrus and that he knew wade, and tricks jax and lorian to telling him that wade was their friend, because cyrus was an enemy of wade’s, and he talks with them for a little while. then he pulls out a compact blaster pistol and tells them to drop their utility belts. Then lorian asks if this is a joke. I just love this line that cyrus says, “yes. We’ll all laugh when you’re dead.” Then he kicks lorian in the stomach and punches him in the face and knocks him out. Then jax angrily tries to twist cyrus’s arm behind his back to arrest him, but cyrus get him in a choke hold and then hurls jax against the bar, hitting his head on it and gets knock out. Then cyrus tells the patrons to lock jax and lorian in the storage room. Then it goes black screen followed by white letters, which reads: to be continued… if you want to read the script in its entirety please visit the link below:
 http://supernewtcheetahblog.blogspot.com/2010/10/pilot-part-i.html

PILOT PART 1 SECTION 2

BACK AT THE LAB IN THE TRIANDININE (A SKYSKRAPER IN CORUSCANT) LORIAN IS MOURNING HEAVILY OVER WADE’S BODY AND “X” IS TRYING TO COMFORT HIM BUT HAS NO SUCCESS. THEN JAX ARRIVES WITH THE MAN’S BODY CONCEALED IN A SELF-CONTAINMENT SEAL AND LORIAN STORMS OUT. THEN “X” AND JAX ARGUE ABOUT THE SEAL AND THAT JAX SHOULD NOT USE IT ANY MORE AND TO CALL HIM WHEN ANOTHER BODY SHOWS UP. THEN HE FINDS THE TRUTH ABOUT THAT HE DID NOT KILL THE MAN AND THAT THE NANOSHELL DID THE JOB, BUT HE SPEED UP THE PROCESS. THEN THEY PUT BOTH WADE’S AND THE MAN’S BODIES INTO A LARGE WALL OF DRAWERS. THEN LORIAN HAS A NIGHTMARE ABOUT WHAT HAD JUST HAPPENED REPEATEDLY THROUGHOUT THE NIGHT. THE NEXT MORNING, JAX WAKES UP LORIAN AND TRYS TO SEEK THEIR FRIENDSHIP AND TO GO ON, BUT LORIAN IS STILL HURT THAT JAX LEFT HIM AT THE BAR AND WASN’T THERE TO DEFEND HIM WHEN FESLI (THE HEAD OF THE CSS (CORUSCANT SECURITY SQUADRON) SAID THAT HE COULD OF DONE MORE TO HELP HIM, BUT THE FACT was THAT THERE WASN’T ANYTHING HE COULD OF DONE BECAUSE HE WAS MORATALLY WOUNDED IN THE NECK AND HE BASICALLY DIED instantaneously. Then they talk to “x” and find out that they have to complete two years of training in one week!!!!! Then (after the one week) they get sworn in and get their badges, which has the letters ida (which means interplanetary detective agency) and new clothes, both get their own unique set of clothes, which they will wear most of the time. Jax wears a pair of dark red pants, brown boots, a dark blue short-sleeve shirt, and a black jacket. Lorian wears a dark green trenchcoat, black pants, dark red belt, black boots, and a white shirt.

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All I’m going to do is give an overview of each episode of “The Adventures of Jax and Lorian.” The first episode, the beginning of what I think would be an awesome series. It starts out with   WADE JARVIS training koryn Jax and jarrid Lorian in a dark room where the only light in that room is where they are training. Then after they are done, T-H1X (“X” for short) a droid of WADE’s comes out of the shadows. Then the three (not including “X”) go to a local bar that they always go to. Then it goes to a dark person heading towards a building, killing the guard, goes to the roof, and puts together what looks to be a long range sniper rifle. Then he goes to the edge and gets the target in the sights, WADE. Then it goes to him reaching in his coat for a com-link and talks to his employer and tells him that he has WADE in his sights. Then it goes to him shooting and then you follow the blaster bolt, in slow motion, to where it hits WADE and kills him. It is a sad moment for our two heroes. But they take in different ways. LORIAN he stays with WADE until his body is taken to their lab. JAX takes a little laser pointer in the hole in the window (where the bolt came in) and points straight at the dark man on the rooftop, the laser pointer showed the path of the laser bolt and where it came from. The man gets real angry and hastily puts the gun away. He is in the turbo lift (elevator if you are not Star Wars savvy) and his employer calls and tell him that he is not going to get the other half of his payment and he was going to die. Then the man starts to feel pain in his stomach because his employer put a nanoshell (a little piece of metal) in him. By the time he is at the bottom of the turbo lift, JAX is there and is ready to take his head off. First the man shoots and misses JAX and then JAX shoots at him and disrupts the signal the nanoshell that is slowly killing the man and it kills him faster than it would have been, but it doesn't kill him instantly.